Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Prompt from http://onemillionfootnotes.blogspot.com/ : He appreciated the brokenness of it, even if he didn't appreciate its beauty.


It was once a part of a beautiful piece of machinery. Pristine and clear, without a scratch on it. When it was first driven there were no dents or cracks. It gleamed in the summer sun as I drove slowly and carefully. It withstood many winters, when an impatient driver would use the it’s washer fluid to defrost its iced covering. 

Then it was only taken for granted. It had traveled through a great deal and made it through the Rockies. The vehicle to which it belonged almost didn’t make it out alive. As the engine made terrible noises, the glass was being assaulted by tiny fragments of mountain. A crack was formed about the size of a chip. Within a day or two it grew to be a foot long scar. 

Now the fracture spans the entirety of the width of the windshield, without hindering the view. I think the damage is glorious. It’s a reminder and a story.

1 comment:

  1. Reminds me of my own windshield crack and inspection coming up and no insurance for it....

    :(

    Thanks!

    You really do a number on this prompt, make it something strange and mysterious. I'm no fan of fiction, but in 162, the 'creative' is always in tension or in conflict with the 'non' of nonfiction. I appreciate it when every so often, as here, the tension disappears and fiction can serve the purposes of nonfiction.

    Nice piece.

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